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Subject: 铁和它的锈
瑞123
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Post at 2007-3-11 23:50
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铁和它的锈
铁和它的锈
更多的时候
铁会把自己的光芒和寒气藏起来
铁因生锈而更像铁
生锈的铁,绝不仅仅是多穿了件衣裳
铁的一生就是在自己的梦里冷抒情
在那些腐烂的日子里
一块铁蒙锈
和一个人蒙羞到底有什么不同
铁的睡眠
迟早会被一块睡得更深的石头
推醒.它们背靠着背
像是一种依偎
却彼此打磨
点燃身体里高贵的灯
一个人死后聚集的磷火
铁生前四溅的钢花
Passion
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Post at 2007-3-12 12:09
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生锈的铁,绝不仅仅是多穿了件衣裳
——还有裤子?
skyjacker
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Post at 2007-3-12 12:49
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人和他的羞(Replace all from <铁和它的锈>)
人和他的羞
更多的时候
人会把自己的光芒和寒气藏起来
人因生羞而更像人
生羞的人,绝不仅仅是多穿了件衣裳
人的一生就是在自己的梦里冷抒情
在那些腐烂的日子里
一个人蒙羞
和一块铁蒙锈到底有什么不同
人的睡眠
迟早会被一窝睡得更深的小猪
推醒.他们背靠着背
像是一种依偎
却彼此打磨
点燃身体里高贵的灯
一个人死后聚集的磷火
人生前四溅的钢花
一壶清茶煮青春.
skyjacker
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Post at 2007-3-12 12:51
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铁人!
一壶清茶煮青春.
瑞123
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Post at 2007-3-12 17:19
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继续改版啊,这首改版的想像空间太大了。
才子们何在?
kendling
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MyvNet
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Post at 2007-3-14 09:51
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这个我不懂耶,帮不了你。
小冬
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